Your middle section about worshipping Kali and watching puja seems interesting. It's a pity that you didn't tell us more about it. It may be been a great post if you shared this tradition and your culture with everyone. Try to explore more communities to do this, such as Hive Cross Culture created/hive-181017 would be a perfect place to share these type of culture posts.
A good post should add value to Hive, making it interesting for readers. A lot of people share macro photography and nature images. Try to make your content different, and stand out from others. Share something unique, and in the correct community.